Monday, October 22, 2012

Planes, Trains and Tamara Hogan

Rockaway Beach, OR
Mark and I just returned from a week-long vacation to the Pacific Northwest which involved many modes of transportation: an Amtrak sleeper car, a couple of taxicabs, a Hertz rental car,  and a drive-aboard BC Ferry ride.
This "Planes, Trains and Automobiles" trip made me think about transportation - or rather, how writers use transportation to convey important information about our characters' lives, attitudes, abilities and worldviews. Here are a couple of examples from my Underbelly Chronicles series:  

TASTE ME's hero, incubus security guru Lukas Sebastiani, is linebacker-sized, and has a need for speed:

"Come on, we need to get inside." He scoped out the parking lot and the shoreline of the Mississippi River, and then stood in front of her to cut off as many angles as he could with his body.

She eyed the space between them. "Can you give me a little room, please?" 


She sighed. "What's up with this car?" she said, indicating his sedate-looking black V8 Impala SS. "It looks like something Valerian would drive." 

While the car was nearly twenty feet long and had Barcalounger seats, under the hood, where it counted, was a completely different story. "Hey, it gets me where I need to go. And I fit in it." 

Scarlett humphed disapprovingly. "Where's the Screw Global Warming bumper sticker?"

"Rather than buying something new, small and politically correct which doesn't meet my needs, I'm using a car that already exists for its complete, useful lifetime." He lightly grasped her upper arm as she stepped away from the car, and this time she didn't pull away from him. Either she was becoming less mad or more exhausted, and frankly either was okay in his book. He needed to get her inside, settle her in. 

He'd wait until later to hit the gym and work off some of this killing rage. 

TASTE ME's heroine, siren rock star Scarlett Fontaine, travels primarily by tour bus, which has its own unique set of challenges. Here, just home from tour, Scarlett and members of her band talk about life on the road, and their...aromatic drummer, Stephen:

"He's the reason the tour bus smelled like sex all the time," Tansy grumbled. "On the next tour, we need to have a 'no sex on the bus' rule."

"You can't be serious," one of their roadies said. "Good luck with that."

Me and Dave Grohl at
Seattle's  Experience Music Project
"You and your rules," Michael said with a roll of his eyes. "You'd have to wallpaper it from stem to stern to cover all the places Stephen's had sex on that bus. And then he'd just find places no one had thought about yet."

"Those damn socks of his. Jesus, he's got some foot funk," Joe, the vampire who played rhythm guitar and keyboards, chimed in. He raised his creamy Guinness. "Here's to clean socks."

"To 3:00 a.m. greasy spoon breakfasts!"

"To room service!"

"To Nessie, who got us here safely!" "Nessie" was the band's nickname for their workhorse tour bus, which had covered over 50,000 miles on this last tour, with only one stop for repairs outside Calgary. 

A cheer went up. "Hear, hear!"

"To the next tour!" someone called. Everyone groaned again. Scarlett laughed as she was expected to, but her gut bubbled in warning. "Let's finish this one first, okay?" she said. "We do have one more show to go." And she was dreading it. 

CHASE ME's hero, werewolf geologist Gabe Lupinsky, is a city boy at heart:

Gabe bumped along the rutted dirt path someone had mistakenly informed him was a road, wincing when something scraped the undercarriage of his Beemer. He hadn't seen a sign of civilization since taking a left at the ramshackle watering hole squatting where the asphalt ended and the gravel began. 

He should have stopped at Tubby's Municipal Liquor Store when he'd had the chance, because this road was going to drive him to drink.

For CHASE ME's heroine, rough-and-tumble Valkyrie archaeologist Lorin Schlessinger, it's all about utility...or is it? 

She turned off her mind, turned the radio to the 80's station, and sang away the miles, the volume loud enough so she couldn't hear her phone ring if she wanted to. When Bon Jovi started wailing about shots to the heart and who's to blame, she snapped off the music with a curse--just in time to hear a clunk. She looked in her rearview mirror.

She was spitting sparks.

Crap. Tailpipe? Muffler? Up ahead, like an oasis in the desert, she saw a green road sign: Hinckley. One Mile. Excellent. She'd stop at Tobies, do some emergency repairs, and then have a cinnamon roll to reward a job well done. 

Okay, two cinnamon rolls. 

Wincing, she muscled the truck up the exit ramp and pulled into the parking lot. The last six months had been a steady succession of emergency repairs. It was probably time to permanently park her old truck up at the dig and buy a new one, and she was more than a little depressed at the prospect. She'd bought the truck used when she was a teenager, and half a lifetime of memories lay in every spill soiling the carpet, and every crack in the dash. The windshield had been replaced countless times, and she'd taken her first lover on the roomy bench seat. A couple of Buttercup's doggy nose prints still smudged the back window, carefully framed by black electrical tape so she wouldn't wipe them off by mistake.

Each transportation mode, and the character's thoughts and perceptions about it while we're in their point of view, helps flesh out our understanding of the character. Suffice it to say that Lukas or Lorin wouldn't be caught dead on an Amtrak train. Scarlett and Gabe would be just fine, though Gabe might privately be disappointed by the wine list.

For Mark and me, our vacation was a perfect balance of passive sightseeing and independent exploring, of people and solitude, of city and countryside. Give me a place to sit, a way to see the scenery, and a way to get some silence if I need it, and it's all good.  

What's your preferred mode of vacation transportation? Why? What, if anything, do you think this choice reveals about you? 

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Award-winning author Tamara Hogan loathes cold and snow, but nonetheless lives near Minneapolis with her partner Mark and two naughty cats. When she’s not telecommuting to Silicon Valley, she enjoys writing edgy urban fantasy romance with a sci-fi twist. A feral reader with an unapologetic television addiction, Tammy is forever on the lookout for the perfect black boots.

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  1. My preferred mode of leisure travel is on the back of a stout horse. What this reveals about me is that... I like having good company, and the companionship on the journey matters more than the destination or the speed with which I approach it.

    Wonderful excerpts--a mini-tour of the Underbelly bookshelf.

  2. No trains or planes if I have a choice in the matter. It's the latter of the choices...automobile...that I'll lay claim to. I get some of my best plotting done in the passenger seat of a car! Husband thinks we should buy a Harley and take a cross-country trip on it but I'd rather have an air conditioned automobile with an adjustable seat!

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  4. Grace, I've been on a horse exactly once in my life - Girl Scouts, I think - but I remember looking into my horse's eyes and wondering what she made of the whole situation.

  5. Carolyn, for some reason riding the Amtrak was on both our bucket lists, and I'd do it again in a situation where we could allocate the time. We got a sleeper car, mainly so I could block out the rest of the world when it got too noisy.

    You'd have to get really creative to take notes on the back seat of a Harley. ;-)

  6. Car. I love spending that close time with my family, playing car games and laughing. We all get along so great in the car :-)


  7. I don't really like to travel. I guess airplane is the best and fastest way, but usually by the time I get on the plane, I'm exhausted from all the waiting and scanning, and queuing.

  8. Chelsea, I envy you your family car travels. When I was young, my sisters and I pretty much turned the back seat into Carsick Central. ;-)

  9. Shana, air travel is definitely the most expedient choice most of the time, but I find the entire process absolutely draining. There are too many noisy people in too small a place, and somehow I always come home bearing strange bruises.

  10. A plane because you can get to the place faster


  11. A plane will certainly get you there most quickly, bn100!

  12. If possible, my preferred mode is automobile. I enjoy stopping and exploring points of interest along the way.

  13. Automobile - more freedom to stop when I want and not feel rushed.

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  14. My preferred vacation mode is a comfortable sized car or SUV. I want to see the land and people and not just fly over them. I'm not sure what this says about me other than I'm an observer. I do that sometimes at the mall too... just people watch:)

  15. Mary, taurus, it IS nice to just pull over and sop at a location that interests you, isn't it? To be in control of the schedule and the itinerary?

  16. yadkny, are you a writer? I think a lot of us are comfortable observing. It's amazing how many of those things we observe show up in our books! I get a lot of my characters' physical descriptions from complete strangers who I see once, and will never see again. ;-)

  17. Great Blog, Tamara! I enjoyed reading those snippets. Me I prefer doing the driving :) If I have no other way to get there except by plane, I will, but not without a lot anxiety. I'm not a fan of flying. I do take the train into NYC rather than drive there, though. :)

  18. Colleen, your comment about wanting to do the driving makes me smile. I rented the rental car in my name, so I insisted on driving during our trip. That left Mark clear for navigation tasks. He has this horrible habit of looking at his phone while he drives. Drives me absolutely batty.

    Not while I'm in the car, dude.

  19. Since I was a little girl I have wanted to dine and sleep on a train. I hope you loved it.

  20. I love to fly--private planes. That's my favorite form of transportation. I don't mind driving, though when it's pretty, I don't want to be the one having to watch the road. I've always wanted to take the train across Canada--it's supposed to be beautiful, DH and I were just talking about that while we were driving through the mountains of Idaho. I've been on amtrak from DC to NY and such, but I don't consider that really traveling.

    The trains in Europe are amazing, I went all over France, Spain and Italy by train, but could never afford a sleeper car. Maybe next time. :)

  21. Amelia, I'd definitely ride the train again if my schedule allowed for it. One thing about the Amtrak is that it doesn't own the tracks, so if there's contention, the passenger train has lower priority than a train transporting logs or other goods. Our arrival in Portland was delayed by about 5 hours because of track contention - oh, and that snow in NoDak and the brush fire in Washington State. ;-)

  22. Robin, I've never been on a private plane, but the roomette option on the Amtrak ended up costing about the same as two plane tickets would have. When the bunks are set up, the roomette is pretty much all bed. My SO is 6'5", 240 lbs. The bed barely fit him, and he had to open the roomette's doors to take off his cowboy boots. And storage? Forget it. *grin*

  23. I prefer to drive. After that transatlantic flight to and from Ireland last spring, I dislike flying even more than I did before! Great excerpts!

  24. Cheryl, yeah - those long intercontinental flights can really be draining. I have difficulty sleeping on planes, so flights I've taken to India and Australia left me totally wiped out.

    I'm glad you enjoyed the excerpts!

  25. And the winner is...yadkny! Watch for an email from me requesting your snail mail address. Thanks, everyone, for stopping by!

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